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ON THE VERGE by ~PoetryDelivered:iconPoetryDelivered:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2006-2009 ~PoetryDelivered
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Painting is oil on canvas - painted by me


ON THE VERGE

Girl you’re like a clinging vine
The way you hold to me
It’s really starting to blow my mind
Your insecurity

I only went to the store
To buy some groceries
Your wild accusations
Scare the hell out of me

You say that you love me
It’s true I can tell
But can’t you say it softly
It doesn’t help to yell

Try to get a hold of yourself
Pa-leesze for Gods sake
You’re driving me away
There’s only so much I can take

I’ve really tried to stay with you
Though leaving is my urge
Don’t how much more I can take
I’m really on the verge

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~glucklich Oct 15, 2006, 1:14:36 PM
the painting is really pretty. your trees are au'some!!

the poem flow so well, it's just amazing!!
you're
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~Kyairthwen Oct 15, 2006, 1:33:48 PM
Wow. Beautiful painting, and the poem is amazing.What inspired, if I may ask?

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:raincloud:Whenever it is a damp, drizzly November in my soul, the sea is my lady saviour...:raincloud:

:pride: :music: :pumpkin: :kiss: :blackrose: :skullbones: :ambulance: :deviation: <--All the important things
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~PoetryDelivered Oct 15, 2006, 2:52:27 PM
Gosh Babe - you're always so sweet!! Thank you! and thanks for the :+fav:

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If it ain't broke - don't "fix" it!!!
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~PoetryDelivered Oct 15, 2006, 2:58:43 PM
Thanks Kimber - what inspired the painting? A friend during a conversation wondered what the Garden of Eden may have looked like - this was my interpretation. This was one of the paintings covered in the mud but I was able to dig it out, clean it up and restore it. Fortunately, oil paint is like concrete when it dries.

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If it ain't broke - don't "fix" it!!!
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~Kyairthwen Oct 16, 2006, 3:58:19 PM
Congrats on the painting! And no, I meant what inspired the poem :)

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:raincloud:Whenever it is a damp, drizzly November in my soul, the sea is my lady saviour...:raincloud:

:pride: :music: :pumpkin: :kiss: :blackrose: :skullbones: :ambulance: :deviation: <--All the important things
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~PoetryDelivered Oct 16, 2006, 4:39:53 PM
What inspired the poem? A girlfriend from long ago, she was a clinging vine one minute and a shrieking witch the next. I just happened to remember her now. Don't know why!

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If it ain't broke - don't "fix" it!!!
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~Kyairthwen Oct 16, 2006, 8:10:23 PM
Well, there's a reason for everything. :) I'm sorry you had to go through that, but still. Regret nothing! :)

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:raincloud:Whenever it is a damp, drizzly November in my soul, the sea is my lady saviour...:raincloud:

:pride: :music: :pumpkin: :kiss: :blackrose: :skullbones: :ambulance: :deviation: <--All the important things
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~PoetryDelivered Oct 16, 2006, 9:03:18 PM
I rarely regret things that happen, I find no point to hand wringing!

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If it ain't broke - don't "fix" it!!!
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